Quite simple
I'll keep it in small talk.
Track is way too basic and simple minded.
This first because of the shitload of loops you've used. (Yes I know them all).
Too much reeverb on the kicks. Though the bass is really nice, could've used an bit more of EQ work. (Reeverb on the intro kicks I mean here). There might be the same amount of reeverb on the kicks in the main part. But there it's hardly noticeable because it gets more fuller. Drop the reeverb down in the intro.
I'm glad you didn't fucked arround that much on effect. You kept them nice and tight. Though scratches trough the whole track? Bit exegerated there.
Tiny things like that ride on the kick worked real well! Finally someone who knows the understanding of them in this genre. Though open hats shouldn't be used that often like you did here. You kept them to a minimal though I am happy about that.
Vocals/voxx used too many times rofl. Ain't working well in hardstyle. Use either a real long one for like 20 sec in a track and drop it after that. Or use an small one most likely with the same thing saying. To keep it more addicting, and I don't mean here the vox; 'bass' or 'freeze/kick/beat' w/e. Use one like 'Mental syndrome' for example, and name your track also after that. Use those in breaks, and builds. None in main w/e.
Got bored real easylie by the scratches and vox. Though I only liked the one at 3:15.
Ending haha, builded of quite sloppy with those things mashed. But I guess it's generic in this kinda genre.
I'm sorry if I've been too harsh on you or anykind I offended you. I was not intended to do that. I am only quite drowned out for today.
Oh yeah one more thing, keep up the mixing!
It sounded clear for me at the moment. Good job!
5/5 7/10 <- Getting the standard 5 for trying this genre I know it's hard.
-Ian